- 慎用定冠词the
- 少用since,多用as:Since there are many TV programs that feature colorful experiences, --> As many TV programs have colourful experiences,
- 动名词作主语,后面加三单
- 注意表意准确无歧义
No, I disagree with the idea that it is bad to move to a new place since[趴3] the loss of old friends.
表述很乱,可以改成I disagree with the notion that frequent relocation leads to the loss of friends, therefore considering it as a negative viewpoint.
- 动名词作主语后面要加三单
- 例子如果是过去式,动词全变过去式
- 写作能用复数的全复数好了
- 注意and前后的并列关系
- academic既是形容词又可以做名词
- on the contrary和contrary to 不要搞混搭